Monday, 3 April 2017

Week 6, Day 1 - Critique / Feedback

Video:

- The music and sound needs to be lowered. Drowns out the voice too much.
- Boost the voice, needs to be louder than the music / Music is an afterthought, not as important
- Colours / Saturation need to be looked at, some scenes are fine
- Adjust volume of the music during certain scenes / Don't keep it flat, sometimes you don't want it
- Stopping and starting music again and again, when the phone alarm rings, falling over, etc
- Recreate more sound effects (Falling over, car crash?)
- Add more scenes to the video, tripping up (add same shots as previous scene), talking about crowdfunding and raising more more, the scenes with the car and it being stopped.

Still need to work on it a lot for hand-in next class.

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